tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8634046954887838834.post7047261287285352482..comments2023-05-15T13:37:32.328+02:00Comments on Falcon T: Hourglass - Falcon T© original haiku 2011Falcon Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15704692460409718691noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8634046954887838834.post-50029816701407954452015-02-08T20:34:46.860+01:002015-02-08T20:34:46.860+01:00lovely.lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8634046954887838834.post-74887592959373205912011-12-09T01:44:09.233+01:002011-12-09T01:44:09.233+01:00Wonderful....Wonderful....e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8634046954887838834.post-70019677205274616572011-12-05T23:15:43.106+01:002011-12-05T23:15:43.106+01:00Really enjoyed reading this. It was quite powerful...Really enjoyed reading this. It was quite powerful. I know your thoughts were probably so different when you wrote this, but this is what your poem showed me: <br />I saw the sun coming up on dark, gray sand and turning it into pure, glistening gold and the girl who lay sleeping on her bed dreamed of being chased by monsters, who instantly turned into beautiful butterflies as the sun kissed her face.Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8634046954887838834.post-49511397541788190832011-11-30T19:04:23.385+01:002011-11-30T19:04:23.385+01:00love the opening line,
vivid imagery,
a story w...love the opening line, <br /><br />vivid imagery, <br />a story well told.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com