donderdag 18 augustus 2011

Girl in a field - Falcon T© original haiku 2011

keep looking away
I want to take a picture
your face ruins it

go stand in that field
I do love your cellulite
but not in this shot

put on a red dress
you do look better in blue
but i need contrast

I really love you
not up close and personal
but from a distance

go enjoy the view
and I will enjoy my view
from right over here
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6 opmerkingen:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry18 augustus 2011 om 15:33

    your words make one wonder, well done.

    keep it up.

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  2. Marbles in My Pocket18 augustus 2011 om 16:15

    This is a very interesting and well done take on the prompt. Nicely written.

    Here is my story for week 8: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/

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  3. Anoniem19 augustus 2011 om 13:02

    Hartstikke mooi :) Haiku's en rap hebben veel overeenkomsten geloof ik. Prettige Bluebellbooks rally!

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall21 augustus 2011 om 01:54

    unique and beautiful..

    Thanks for sharing.
    :)

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  5. Liz Rice-Sosne21 augustus 2011 om 16:52

    I am awfully glad that I read your "rap-sheet" so to speak. ;) I too had some questions, but no longer. This is well done!

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  6. e.a.s. demers23 augustus 2011 om 22:31

    interesting take on the prompt! well done :-)

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