woensdag 28 september 2011

Blowing bubbles - Falcon T© original haiku 2011

bubbles blowing by
beautiful brush of colors
floating in the sky

touching me inside
I can't believe such beaty
is just made to pop

dip your stick in soap
don't mean to bust you're bubble
cannot keep it whole

fata morgana
chase the elusive bubble
get soap in your eyes
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7 opmerkingen:

  1. The Cello Strings28 september 2011 om 18:58

    love the colors in your words,

    busting bubbles is part of life, well done.

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  2. Anoniem28 september 2011 om 19:17

    Wonderful, loved the lines in the second stanza.

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  3. Kay29 september 2011 om 14:00

    The first stanza is so lovely. "beautiful brush of colors floating in the sky" Wow! xoXox

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  4. Ann LeFlore30 september 2011 om 05:07

    This reminds me so much of being so very young and holding a bottle of bubbles in my hand and trying so hard to blow them and never have them break. Wonderful write thanks
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/29/bubbling-potion-of-love/

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  5. Marbles in My Pocket30 september 2011 om 20:21

    Very nice write. Colorful visions.

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/30/bubbles-and-lies/

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  6. Anoniem2 oktober 2011 om 04:34

    enjoy the bubbles of life before they burst:)

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  7. e.a.s. demers10 oktober 2011 om 23:52

    Really like this one :-)

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