this one is based purely on the first thought of the picture:
sit in the water
the warmth consumes you in awe
radiating you
this one kinda just came up with the bathtub in mind but i doubt you could guess the train of thought i had when I wrote it:
you cherish your face
you take care of your body
I love the outcome
it means: i'm glad you don't use make up
you look great, but also could mean: you like taking baths
I like you..
stating the comforting feeling of the bath:
take off all your clothes
now step into the water
leave dark thoughts behind
dual: the feeling of the bath but then in love with a particular girl in mind
or just wittiness about a bath:
every time we meet
I feel so comfortably
stepping in the heat
means just how it sounds:
let me in your life
step into my bath of love
meaningful embrace
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Interesting set of haikus.I like the 'cherish your face' one the most.
BeantwoordenVerwijderenJamie
Delightful!
BeantwoordenVerwijderensmiles,
BeantwoordenVerwijderenvery smiling and encouraging piece.
I don't think you need to explain...cause' you blew out my perfect experience with it. I don't know if you demeaned it (my reading of it) or affirmed it. But, I believe, it wasn't necessary.
BeantwoordenVerwijderenI liked it,alone.
ZQ
Well done...
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