maandag 18 april 2011

Falcon T © original haiku 2011

These haiku i've written over the course of the last month.

the first english haiku i ever wrote was:

silly girls with brains
are to be preferred over
humorless others

I was thinking about japan and what terrible purpose they had encountered and wrote:

the thought of others
having an even worse time
makes a humble man

When ever i make a mistake, or trip I think by myself:

a princes sees it
a knight in shining armor
falling from his horse

sometimes i ponder:

underneath the stars
standing by the waterside
we have stopped to stare

No one walks through life untouched by inequality and injustice:

when you get some scars
you know you are working on
getting a thick skin

an observation:

the world seems less bright
when i step out of the sun
to rest in the shade

sometimes we look but we don't see:

seeing the unseen
discovering the lost art
of opening eyes

12 opmerkingen:

  1. all of these Haikus are thoughtful.

    Welcome.

    thanks for sharing, bless Japan, bless your creative soul.

    A++

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  2. I loved these, Tim! not only thoughtful, but deep and thought provoking! Thanks for sharing!

    My Potluck Post

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  3. Mooi! Rap en haiku, er zijn vast veel raakvlakken?

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  4. great job, I enjoyed your Haikus :)
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  5. awesome job! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  6. these were great!

    Luna


    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  7. glad to have you be part of jingle poetry community.

    welcome join poets rally week 42, click on my link to view the collections.

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  8. How are you?
    Please consider making a contribution to poets rally week 43 today,
    A free verse is appreciated, you rock!

    See you soon.
    Happy Thursday!
    xoxox

    love your input at poetry potluck.

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  9. Some very good writing! I liked them all!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/11/farmers-lament-2/

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  10. Perfect, well structured and well thought out Haiku.

    Here is my post.
    http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html

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  11. such a wonderful haiku
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/

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