donderdag 21 juli 2011

Seven Haiku - Falcon T© original haiku 2011

the notes of this song
take me to it's origin
back in jamaica

look through the glass
instead of at the window
to see it's beauty

underneith it all
there is a silver lining
to see through the pain

to want maximum
with a minimum input
not a wordy cause

the pen hits paper
and leaves it's intended mark
a masters omen

does he want quarters
when he begs for change
often I wonder

try to look less deep
into that nights glass of yours
and take it easy

4 opmerkingen:

  1. I agree - brilliant.

    Anna :o]

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  2. your are excellent in writing Haikus.
    love these!

    Greetings:

    Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.

    Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.

    Keep up the excellence.
    Hope to see you linked in and share.

    BEST!
    xoxox

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