woensdag 28 september 2011

Blowing bubbles - Falcon T© original haiku 2011

bubbles blowing by
beautiful brush of colors
floating in the sky

touching me inside
I can't believe such beaty
is just made to pop

dip your stick in soap
don't mean to bust you're bubble
cannot keep it whole

fata morgana
chase the elusive bubble
get soap in your eyes

7 opmerkingen:

  1. love the colors in your words,

    busting bubbles is part of life, well done.

  2. Wonderful, loved the lines in the second stanza.

  3. The first stanza is so lovely. "beautiful brush of colors floating in the sky" Wow! xoXox

  4. This reminds me so much of being so very young and holding a bottle of bubbles in my hand and trying so hard to blow them and never have them break. Wonderful write thanks

  5. Very nice write. Colorful visions.


  6. enjoy the bubbles of life before they burst:)